tokenblkgirl ([info]tokenblkgirl) wrote,
@ 2009-05-29 20:19:00
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Current mood: peaceful
Entry tags:doctor who, heroes, hiro, martha jones, monica dawson

2 Heroes Request Drabbles
Title: Night
Fandoms: Doctor Who/Heroes
Pairing: Martha Jones/Monica Dawson
Rating: PG
Words: 228
Summary: She turns until she can’t see the sky either.
Notes: Written for [info]toestastegood in this request meme. Also written for [info]doctorwho_100 prompt#46 Star. Link to my table here. And for [info]heroes15 prompt #15, tears. Link to my table here.


She can see Monica becoming upset as she points out Orion for the third time and explains that it’s just beyond the third building on the left. She’s been careless, tossing out words like easy and simple with regard to seeking them out, because for her it is fairly simple. The stars are with her everyday. Her eyes are constantly looking up to see what might become of them this time.

But Monica’s always looked down, focused on putting one foot in front of the other. She’s never seen the stars like this before, with grass tickling her neck and Martha’s hand touching hers. She can’t see the constellation, only a jumble of light and dark, and it upsets her. Makes her pull away, even as Martha moves closer.

“I’m sorry.” She whispers, her hand moving across that small waist. “I thought you’d like it.”

“Why can’t I see it?” Monica has that tone in her voice again. The one that comes when she forgets how extraordinary she is. How beautiful she’s always been.

“It doesn’t matter.”

“It matters to you.”

Martha shakes her head, blocking her view of the darkness above.

“It does. Sometimes.” She turns until she can’t see the sky either. Only the damp grass below, her reflection in those sad dark eyes.

“But you always matter more.”



Title: Childish Things
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Monica/Hiro
Rating: PG
Words: 227
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: He was never good with tears.
Notes: This was a pairing requested by [info]msloserrific. Also written for [info]heroes15 prompt #6/Desperation. Link to my table here.

Hiro was never good with tears, even when he was child.

The mere sight of watery eyes would instantly make his bottom lip tremble, something his mother always assured him was perfectly normal for a boy his age. That he was just sensitive. But after one too many taunts thrown his way, he’d started to doubt that assertion. Or at least the idea that being a bit sensitive was actually good thing.

So he becomes slightly frantic when Monica starts to cry, yet another state he’s not unfamiliar with. He removes his glasses and turns her pretty brown face into a mix of blurry images. But it doesn’t help. He can still hear her sniffles, the defeated tilt of her head. He thinks of puppies. Of sunshine and manga comics. He thinks of cotton candy sticking on his chin while Ando teases him about the mess he’s making. But it doesn’t help. Because she’s still crying.

She’s still sad.

So he kisses her. Out desperation, figuring the embarrassment of her rejection would be significantly less than the shame of bursting into possibly hysterical tears. But he doesn’t expect to enjoy it as much as he does. Or for her to kiss him back. For her hands to pull him closer.

And he wonders if his mother was right.

Maybe being sensitive was a good thing after all.





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[info]razycrandomgirl
2009-05-30 03:24 am UTC (link)
:)

Aww Monica is feeling a little down.

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-30 03:54 am UTC (link)
I realized recently that having a table full of angst prompts means tons of sad stories. I think I'll claim happy prompts next time. :)

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[info]razycrandomgirl
2009-05-30 05:34 am UTC (link)
I know the feeling.

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-31 03:22 am UTC (link)
LOL. ^^ Love that icon. :)

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[info]blackmamba_esq
2009-05-30 04:01 am UTC (link)
Oooh, I like. I think Martha/Stars is your OTP :) And love the characterization of Hiro. Great job on both!

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-30 04:19 am UTC (link)
I think you're right. I love the idea of Martha and the stars. They never let her down. :) I'm glad you liked Hiro too, I was kind of worried about that one.

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[info]msloserrific
2009-05-30 02:15 pm UTC (link)
*EXPLODES IN A PINK POOF OF GLITTERY SQUEE*

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-31 03:21 am UTC (link)
\o/ I'm glad you like!

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[info]zxfactor
2009-05-30 05:51 pm UTC (link)
Awe both of these are awesome ♥ Well done Token

Edited at 2009-05-31 02:24 am UTC

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-31 03:21 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much zeta! *hugs*

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[info]fourzoas
2009-05-31 04:12 am UTC (link)
These are really great; I'd forgot how much I enjoyed Monica despite my disappointment in Heroes overall. And Hiro AND Martha seeing the awesome in her? So much win!

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-31 02:41 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for reading, I had no idea you'd watched Heroes.:) I actually stopped watching after the first ep of the 3rd season, so I share your disappointment, trust me. I'm pretty sure my fics will never go beyond the second season. :)

I always enjoyed Monica too, I love writing fics for her.

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[info]fourzoas
2009-05-31 02:45 pm UTC (link)
I haven't watched Heroes in a while--I think I probably stopped shortly after you did, since I was pretty well disgusted with the way things were developing. I've heard that it gets better, and I may give it a go on Netflix later this summer, but I'm not wildly enthusiastic.

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-31 03:01 pm UTC (link)
I heard that it gets better too. I'm not sure if I can watch without my favorite characters though, all of which were banished after the second season. Well, except HRG. I think I'll love him forever. :D

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[info]xanatosdecrion
2009-05-31 02:47 pm UTC (link)
OOoh, very nice. Both of 'em. I hope to begin my Dr. Who quest soon...soon...soon. :) Very nice. We love Monica :D

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-31 02:53 pm UTC (link)
Thank you MZ! Monica's awesome, I can't seem to stop writing her lately. :D And I'm looking forward to your thoughts on DocWho, and Martha in particular. :)

Edited at 2009-05-31 02:53 pm UTC

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[info]idjunkie
2009-05-31 04:56 pm UTC (link)
In a few words, you managed to really capture raw emotions. Lovely drabbles! :)

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-05-31 08:10 pm UTC (link)
*hugs* Thank you so much! :D

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[info]toestastegood
2009-05-31 08:33 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thank you so much for this! I love what you've done with the pairing, the way they are so opposite with Martha looking up and Monica looking down. It so perfectly captures how they are both incredibly strong women in incredibly different ways. ^^ Thank you!!

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-06-01 04:36 am UTC (link)
You're so welcome! And thank you for requesting it, I'm not sure I ever would have considered this pairing before. I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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[info]lilacsigil
2009-06-01 03:10 am UTC (link)
Martha/Monica fic! I haven't seen this pairing anywhere else, and I love it! Their connection is immediately visible and strong, despite their differences, and I love the way that you gently show Martha's viewpoint of Monica's beauty as well as Monica's frustration and sorrow.

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-06-01 04:38 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I wish I could take credit for this pairing, but it was the result of a fic request meme that I posted recently. But I really had fun with this fic, because it does make a lot of sense, doesn't it? :D

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[info]sophinisba
2009-06-01 12:23 pm UTC (link)
Wow, Martha/Monica! I loved this!

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[info]tokenblkgirl
2009-06-02 12:12 am UTC (link)
*g* Thank you so much!

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